Suggestions
Aaron's suggestions:
In the book The Outsiders, some parts of the book jump from one thing to the next. My suggestion is that they should lead into the next scene with something interesting. Another suggestion that I have is there should be more suspense. The book is a good book over all |
Alex's suggestions:
In The Outsiders, I would change the ending. I would make a hometown police officer help out Ponyboy and Johnny, and make them all be in "cahoots" with each other. That would be far more exciting knowing that a police officer is helping criminals hide from other police officers. It would be a big nationwide scandal with the police department. |